E-Mahler's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Messing with sounds]

I agree with the other its a bit short also i think the main sound you are using becomes a little repetative and the lead sound you brought in at 30 seconds you should add some reverb to it

But none the less good job on this thus far :)

edman3d responds:

Never realized people commented on this stuff, sorry. You should check out my newest track and let me know how it is compared to this monstrosity :).

[-+[Han Solo]+-]

HAha this is pretty cool xD I am not a fan of the vocal tweaking its not that you did it wrong or anything I just not a fan of that :P but still its good Ima give it a 4 star ONLY cause your voice is a little to powerful in the mic I think it should maby have a little more reverb and volume turn down only slightly this is just what I think but good job and awesome lyrics xD

LadyArsenic responds:

Lol I don't like people who autotune that much either but in the original Jason Derulo song he does it so it's like... Damn, guess I'd better be faithful or something, hahaha.
I have this brand new microphone and I'm still working on making it fit my voice haha, I got a little too excited when I made this I'm afraid. Sorry about that!

[-+[Zero Gravity]+-]

a few of the whistling sounds are a bit loud if i was wearing headphones i think it might hurt xD but I really like the atmosphere you have created with this piece great job :D

PS really love the voices ^ ^

LadyArsenic responds:

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad that you could enjoy it. ^_^
Those stupid whistles gave me so much trouble lol. I have the headphones with the absolute worst threshold and can never tell when something is too loud. I'll have to go back and tweak it again hahaha

[RubinitRemix]

It has a certain charm to it I do agree that it is a bit repetitive but again it has a charm to it the flute doesn't fit to well but it doesn't ruin it keep makin music bro the longer you do it the better you get and you have some talent :)

khay8 responds:

Thank you for your review :D ok i might choose a different instrument i thought it went well but i guess i can find a new one oo thanks ill try to keep trying to make music :3
Edit: lol.... I tried to look for a different instrument but I like the japan flute so much sorry :(

[Blooming Gloom]

ITs ok the bass thing is beating up the snares I think xD

I think the power of the main lead or bass sound should be dropped a little its overpowering the other sounds a bit to much over all its not bad I do like the melody that comes in.

Also I think it was good that you cut out the main melody at the 2 minute mark cause it does get a little repetative you should leave it out a little longer before bringing it back in I think none the less good job on this :)

Gustav21508 responds:

thanks for the review, I was worried about this song and listening to it over and over again, I didn't realize the issue with the bass. I really love the bass in this song, but the Snare and hihats are not coming through, as well as they should be.
Thank you for the opinion!

[Gaseous Forms]

Pretty nice teh guitar around 1:25 gets a little loud I think its cause theres multiple ones going o.O? Sounds a little clashy BUT its not bad I like the feel of the song my real gripe is the drums and snares they seem to soft not enough impact if you changed those and tweaked the guitars a little I think this song would be golden :)

Gustav21508 responds:

Now that you mention it the point at 1:25 mark, I can hear the sounds of the guitar distorting my headphones, it hadn't done that since I made this song, listening to the stereo, I know what you mean by the guitars being too loud, there were 3 guitar sounds going on, a rhythm, a lead and a melodic.
However, I was aiming to keep the drums relatively soft, as opposed to adding some.. "Oomph" if you will, I wanted to have this song flow more than head bobbing, but I will experiment on it.
Thanks for the review.

[Funky Getaway]

Sounds pretty interesting :P though I do have to agree with the other person, not to big on the vocals :P.

But I will say this you certainly managed to bring a funky feel :)

StaticBlu responds:

Thanks for the input.

[The Escape]

Was pretty interesting some sounds dont match very well together, but if you ad some reverb to them that might help. I dont use Logic Pro so I wouldnt know hwo to add reverb to the sounds with that but if you can find a way I am sure it will help mesh things together a bit better :)

Also the way the song changed it seemed like 2 song :P

Keep at it we all get better the more we make ^ ^

amyrenee responds:

Thank you :D

[Eye of the Beholder]

It sounds a little rough but its alright the change around 2 minutes was unexpected not sure if that was for better or for worse but it changed the feel to the song so that it wasn't repetitive :)

AliceMako responds:

Yeah i was aiming for that glorious soundblaster pro sound featured in the intros and the sparse cut scenes that these games all had. (well, the pc versions anyway)

[The Exit Is Near]

I really like the feel to this song man its really really good O.O

What ever you do dont stop makin music you got some real talent.

Infact I think I am gonna download this song xD

liljchosen responds:

Thanks man, i really appreciate it. It's comments like these that keep me rolling. these last few tracks i posted were actually projects that i had lost the files to. i will be making improvements, no doubt. haha.