Im not a very avid metal fan but this sounds pretty good though I want to call it more like alternative metal or something as most metal I have heard has some one screaming their vocals apart ._.
With some tuning here and there to up the quality of this song it would definitely be a 5 star (For me anyway)
Very good song though I'll be completely honest I listen to music for the music (Not really the vocals) so I wouldn't be able to repeat the lyrics in this song but when I focus on it I can see how it could draw a person in :)
BTW nice ending sorta but I think the um vocals were prolong a tad bit